I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka rawe, great work Margaret and Azaria. I love how you began by introducing yourselves and your chosen picture book. What were some of the dark colours that the illustrator used?
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Ka rawe, great work Margaret and Azaria. I love how you began by introducing yourselves and your chosen picture book. What were some of the dark colours that the illustrator used?
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