I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi im Dion from paroa school and I like how you made the charecters change but didint really make sence and I like that your trying to show others to be carfull with your chromebooks
Hi Margaret this is me Gunveen in your class. It is a very thoughtfull message to tell everyone to keep their stuff at the right place where it is supposed to be.
Talofa Lava Margaret, It's me Shriya from your class Rm 11 Great job on your animation. It is important to never put your Chromebook,laptop or phone on the ground because your device can break if someone steps on it or runs over it. Keep up the great job
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi im Dion from paroa school and I like how you made the charecters change but didint really make sence and I like that your trying to show others to be carfull with your chromebooks
ReplyDeletegood job im daz from ahipara school and maybe be a little more careful with your chromebook
ReplyDeleteHi Margaret
ReplyDeleteI like your animaiton
Maybe try to keep the same person for the same a slides
Very good
Kyvana from Ahipara school
hi im emily from paora school mabe add more its really goood
ReplyDeleteHi Margaret this is me Gunveen in your class. It is a very thoughtfull message to tell everyone to keep their stuff at the right place where it is supposed to be.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava Margaret,
ReplyDeleteIt's me Shriya from your class Rm 11
Great job on your animation. It is important to never put your Chromebook,laptop or phone on the ground because your device can break if someone steps on it or runs over it.
Keep up the great job