I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Margaret, It is Yazmin from paroa school I am your tuhi mai tuhi atu buddy for the reast of the year! With your paragraph 1 you need to read over it because it doesn't make sense! Instead of 4 brother maybe put 4 brothers. It is all amazing and I really like it! Your buddy Yazmin
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Margaret, It is Yazmin from paroa school I am your tuhi mai tuhi atu buddy for the reast of the year! With your paragraph 1 you need to read over it because it doesn't make sense! Instead of 4 brother maybe put 4 brothers. It is all amazing and I really like it!
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