I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Margaret Thank you for explaining how to play Drop Top. If you didn't cheat and had to drop it the same way every time, how is the bottle top most likely to land?
Hello Margaret! It's Eden from Paroa school! I love this blog post and I think you have done a great job! Is there anything you can do to make this blog post better than before? I hope you are having a great day and keep up the good work! Bye from Eden.
Hello Margaret, Thanks for explaining how to play top drop it is very cool! I like how you explained everything aka the rules and how to win. Next time you should check your spelling mistakes and correct them. Yours Yazmin
Talofa lava Margaret, Its great to see you have the time and effort for you to explain how to play top drop. I LOVE the creativity and the colours put in your work, it really left me shocked. Thank you for showing how to win it and even the rules. Maybe next tiem you should tell how to play this game so other people would play this FUN game. What was the point of this game ? Why did you play this game ? Thank you for sharing your work.
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Kia ora Margaret
ReplyDeleteThank you for explaining how to play Drop Top. If you didn't cheat and had to drop it the same way every time, how is the bottle top most likely to land?
Hello Margaret! It's Eden from Paroa school! I love this blog post and I think you have done a great job! Is there anything you can do to make this blog post better than before? I hope you are having a great day and keep up the good work! Bye from Eden.
ReplyDeleteHello Margaret,
ReplyDeleteThanks for explaining how to play top drop it is very cool!
I like how you explained everything aka the rules and how to win.
Next time you should check your spelling mistakes and correct them.
Yours Yazmin
hi Margaret i like your game it must be very fun for you and your class keep up the good work from karere
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Margaret,
ReplyDeleteIts great to see you have the time and effort for you to explain how to play top drop. I LOVE the creativity and the colours put in your work, it really left me shocked. Thank you for showing how to win it and even the rules. Maybe next tiem you should tell how to play this game so other people would play this FUN game. What was the point of this game ? Why did you play this game ?
Thank you for sharing your work.