Moody Recount Writing test.

 

My Birthday Party

“How many days until my birthday?” I ask my mum. My legs were shaking like it was winter that time because I was really excited for my birthday. I get the car key and give it to my mum “Let's go shopping for my birthday,” I said. When we got there I ran into the store and pointed my finger to a giant fat cake with yummy pinking cream with my name on it.

It was finally my birthday and my family and friends were invited. I was still sleeping that time, and guess what? My parents decided to surprise me with a lot of delicious and mouth watering food. Also there is a castle outside my house. It was morning and it's sunny. I woke up straight away because I can feel the pain in my shoulder, my cousins were jumping on me and told me to wake up.

I got ready and got nervous at the same time because the dress I was wearing was all white like an angel falling from the sky and diamond shine shoes that will shine through your eyes. I put wax on my hair to make sure it won’t get messy and distcack by the wind. I went outside and my family were staring and at me like I'm a queen.

Finally we eat our food but before we eat it we sing happy birthday to me with only 5 candles on fire and standing straight on the cake. I wasn't really hungry that time. but I still want to eat the food that my family gives me and be grateful for what I got. I saw a lot of presents under my cake and I really want to open them straight away.

In conclusion It was finally the end of the day and We ate all the food and the sad thing is my family went back to their homes and say goodbye and happy birthday to me.

Personal comment- It was really fun and I was really excited I see my cousins.