I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great job on this post. I like how you have added a little box about the crust. Maybe next time add more information but anyway great job. Keep Up The Good Work
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Talofa margaret,
ReplyDeleteits me Jimmy I like how you work hard keep up the great and hard work.
Kia Orana Margaret,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this post. I like how you have added a little box about the crust. Maybe next time add more information but anyway great job. Keep Up The Good Work
- Shriya from your class Rm11