I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Margaret, thank you for sharing this on your blog. I like how you have included the links to the articles that you found these words in. One thing you could add is images to help show what the words mean. Mahi pai, good work!
Kia ora Margaret I really like this activity that you have been doing in Room 11. Investigating words that you are not sure of is a great way to develop your understanding of the topic. You have found some very interesting words and their meanings. I wonder if you can now use these words in your own writing? Mahi pai From Kylie in Room 1
Kia Ora Margaret, I love the bright wonderful colours you added to the background. These words you chosen looked very interesting because how you spelt it. Maybe next time you should say the meaning in your own words. Its would excellent if you added some pictures but good on you for posting during lockdown. Can you think of an example ? -Ema From Your Class
Nice work Margaret! The way you have set these out makes them very easy to read.I also like the ideas others have given you for some things to try next. Wendy R3
Kia Ora Margaret, It's me Shriya from your class Rm11 Good job on your work. You made your slides bright and colorful. Also the words you put on your slides are pretty interesting. Great Job!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Margaret, thank you for sharing this on your blog. I like how you have included the links to the articles that you found these words in. One thing you could add is images to help show what the words mean. Mahi pai, good work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Margaret
ReplyDeleteI really like this activity that you have been doing in Room 11.
Investigating words that you are not sure of is a great way to develop your understanding of the topic. You have found some very interesting words and their meanings.
I wonder if you can now use these words in your own writing?
Mahi pai From Kylie in Room 1
Kia Ora Margaret,
ReplyDeleteI love the bright wonderful colours you added to the background. These words you chosen looked very interesting because how you spelt it.
Maybe next time you should say the meaning in your own words. Its would excellent if you added some pictures but good on you for posting during lockdown.
Can you think of an example ?
-Ema From Your Class
Ok Thank you for commenting Emma.
DeleteNice work Margaret! The way you have set these out makes them very easy to read.I also like the ideas others have given you for some things to try next. Wendy R3
ReplyDeleteHi margaret this is me Gunveen in your class. I really enjoyed the background and the work you have been doing during the lockdown, its good.
ReplyDeletethank you Gunveen for commenting on my blog post.
DeleteKia Ora Margaret,
ReplyDeleteIt's me Shriya from your class Rm11
Good job on your work. You made your slides bright and colorful. Also the words you put on your slides are pretty interesting. Great Job!
Thank you Shriya.
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