I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Margaret I really like your post it looks fabulous I really like when you put a reason in it but you need to correct your writing and if I would rate your painting to the original I would say yours would get a 9/10 and the original 10/10 because in my prospective the brighter the colour the worst it would be other then that have a great day and keep up the great work.
Hi Margaret it´s Awa from Ahipara school. I really like your post about the Art colouring book it looks so cool. We have been doing the art colouring book as well. I did that one to and if I would rate your painting to the original I would say yours would get a 9/10. Keep up the good work!!
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Hi Margaret I really like your post it looks fabulous I really like when you put a reason in it but you need to correct your writing and if I would rate your painting to the original I would say yours would get a 9/10 and the original 10/10 because in my prospective the brighter the colour the worst it would be other then that have a great day and keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Margaret it´s Awa from Ahipara school. I really like your post about the Art colouring book it looks so cool. We have been doing the art colouring book as well. I did that one to and if I would rate your painting to the original I would say yours would get a 9/10. Keep up the good work!!
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