I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Margaret, I really like how you explained what you had to do for this task. I also like the lines and photos you picked, the photos really look like the sentences you put there. Keep up the fantastic work! Your friend Olivia.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Margaret, I really like how you explained what you had to do for this task. I also like the lines and photos you picked, the photos really look like the sentences you put there. Keep up the fantastic work! Your friend Olivia.
ReplyDeleteHi Maragaret I like how you did the photo to match the dentences and there are some pretty good write so well done on you.I really like it.
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